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    bart where are you at??

    i know im getting excited to see my bloody valentine....

    im just surprised i havent heard any excitement from you yet...

    this just seems like your type of movie...
    "Do Not Seek Praise. Seek Criticism."

    "If You Can't Solve A Problem, It's Because You're Playing By The Rules."

    "The Perosn Who Doesn't Make Mistakes Is Unlikely To Make Anything."

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    Here is your criticism

    Never end a sentence with a prepostion. It should be "Bart where are you?"

    When I is by itself it should be capitalized.

    It should be i'm not im and haven't not havent.

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    Never end a sentence with a prepostion. It should be "Bart where are you?"
    http://grammartips.homestead.com/prepositions1.html



    But I would agree the sentence was incorrect. (see how I started with But) Should be, "Bart. Where are you?"

    I aint know english major tho.

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    Think I'll go this weekend... Can be hard for me to watch 3D movies, so I hope this one is done well.

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    You know, I haven't even seen the original, but it is in my Netflix queue. This new 3D one does look interesting. However, I have a tendency to doubt it will be any good, as remakes are typically bad for the most part, save for a few gems out there.

    It's funny, you would think that just because the film has a gas masked character in it, that I would be all-over-it. But honestly, since I quit collecting, I have sort of put the whole gas mask thing behind me. I have even thought of changing my username. I still think gas masks are uber-cool and everything. But, it's just one of those things, kind of like an alcoholic who quit drinking and doesn't really want to go to bars any more. I will however subject myself to bad cinema just to catch a glimpse of a VX! (man, I swear that VX-02 in Mission To Mars was the ONLY good thing about that movie )

    Furthermore, the theater experience is something I reserve only for highly anticipated films that I absolutely cannot wait to see.

    If you want to hear me rave about an upcoming film that I am super excited about, it will have to be The Watchmen. I really hope the film is at least half as good as the graphic novel. After that, the next installment of the Terminator series will be on my list of movies to see opening weekend.

    circmand, how was my grammar? I know I have a tendency to write run-on sentences, especially in this casual arena...

    Bart

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    Not too bad

    Circmand should be capitalized.

    I'm not much into grammar but his tag line did request criticism and I could not resist:bgwg:

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    Quote Originally Posted by circmand View Post
    Never end a sentence with a prepostion. It should be "Bart where are you?"

    When I is by itself it should be capitalized.

    It should be i'm not im and haven't not havent.
    Correcting others grammar & spelling can be an AWFULLY slippery slope...

    Most folks don't forget, & go out of their way to watch what you do, say & spell from then on...

    Besides, grammar, punctuation & spelling, have all gone in the toilet, since the new rage in communication is "texting"

    Scuse ME, but WTF ever happened to TALKING to one another?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ldub View Post
    Scuse ME, but WTF ever happened to TALKING to one another?
    It's hard to talk to you when you don't even have a cell phone... Of course if you did, I'd probably just text you.

    j/k

    I totally agree with the texting thing, but disagree with the talking thing. I don't like either I generally prefer email, cause it's on my terms, you send a message, when I get to it, I respond

    If it's an urgent matter, call me, Leave a voicemail, and depending on what is on the message I'll gauge how long I have before I "should" call back. I hate talking on the phone...

    I prefer FTF or email.

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    THE WATCHMEN will be awesome... better be

    I haven't seen The Spirit but have heard horrible things, I loved 300, and Sin City is in my top 5. I love Frank Miller. I haven't read the watchmen but it seems more frank miller than typical DC... (I'm not a comic book dude, the only ones I've read are the Sin City set, and 300, and both of those were within the last 3 years )

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    Why are you bothered so much by this when that literally makes the site more complete ? If anything mal is way too strict with what it should accept or not

    manatoki

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